Tag: 2022 year4 writing

Spy Mouse

Begin writing here: Once upon a time there was a spy mouse and he loved cheese but one day he ran out of cheese “oh come why today why not yesterday I got to go and get some more ”. After that he snuck into my house. Then he found some cheese but it was heavily guarded by a mouse trap, lucky  he is very smart. So he was searching for two little pieces of wire in his spy bag and found only one, but he is very very clever so he used it “ i’m so clever” said the little spy mouse. Finally the spy mouse had way too much cheese to last him a decade “i’m full” said the clever little mouse

Immersion Recount Draft

Term 4  Immersion Assembly

Today we had another immersion assembly but our teachers made an item. Actually every teacher made an item. but the one I liked a little bit was Team 4s because I love superheroes. I also liked Team 2 s item as well because it is amazingly cool, with all the amazing emotions. I was feeling amazed by all of the items because they were so cool. I also remember the song lean on Me” from the riverside club. I love that song because it is amazing. Our item was not bad it was a little bit cooler than Team 5s item. But I liked Team 5s item the most because of all the hairy pillows.

For The Birds Script

Task Description: In the last 2 weeks we did this a script. 

Noah: Narrator
Filipo:  Tall,Big,smart
Levi: Shocked,Not really in the mood bird,
Diamond The happy,excited bird,smart too, 

 Noah: Once on a cool day there were four birds. They were having the best day ever. The little birds were having a nice day. This is how the story started.    

Filipo: Hello, can I join you guys Plz. 

 Levi: (whispering to Diamond) Hey diamond, should we let him                                                                                Join us, 

Diamond: I think Nah

 Filipo: Plz, I will do anything. 

  All: (Whispering) should we (diamond starting to talk) we                 

 

                              

 

                                                                                                                                                   are not letting him join. 

  Levi:  Why not, let him join us? 

  Diamond:  Cuz he is heavy,dumb,ugly and yeah. 

  Filipo: U know what. I am just gonna come to you guys. (Flying to the fifth teen birds

 All: (Whispering to each other) 

 Levi and Diamond: Umm Idk, I think nooooooo he is Filipo: Hello I am coming, to play with you. 

All: NOOOOOOO 

Levi and diamond: Lets get him off. (Poking Filipo Legs)  (The other smart birds) (Filipo is 2 parts) 

Filipo: don’t do it. AHHHH. 

Levi and Diamond: We are all naked,  

Filipo: Here is a leaf, 

All: AHH Go to the bush.

Task Description: In The Last Two Weeks my group name is Filipo Levi Noah Neihana and diamond.

Noah: Narrator
Filipo:  Tall,Big,smart
Levi: Shocked,Not really in the mood bird,
Diamond The happy,excited bird,smart too, 

 Noah: Once on a cool day there were four birds. They were having the best day ever. The little birds were having a nice day. This is how the story started.    

Filipo: Hello, can I join you guys Plz. 

 Levi: (whispering to Diamond) Hey diamond, should we let him                                                                                Join us, 

Diamond: I think Nah

 Filipo: Plz, I will do anything. 

  All: (Whispering) should we (diamond starting to talk) we                 

 

                              

 

                                                                                                                                                   are not letting him join. 

  Levi:  Why not, let him join us? 

  Diamond:  Cuz he is heavy,dumb,ugly and yeah. 

  Filipo: U know what. I am just gonna come to you guys. (Flying to the fifth teen birds

 All: (Whispering to each other) 

 Levi and Diamond: Umm Idk, I think nooooooo he is Filipo: Hello I am coming, to play with you. 

All: NOOOOOOO 

Levi and diamond: Lets get him off. (Poking Filipo Legs)  (The other smart birds) (Filipo is 2 parts) 

Filipo: don’t do it. AHHHH. 

Levi and Diamond: We are all naked,  

Filipo: Here is a leaf, 

All: AHH Go to the bush.